His Final Letter

I now lie here alone, the wounded have joined the dead
Hours pass like years, my body, in shrapnel torn shreds

My duty, my love for my country, I can no longer give
Memories knowing I have lived, are now starting to sieve

Being so far away from my family, so far away from my home
Daylight like my life, allures me to a darkening roam

 
  To my love I write this letter, my wife my lovely Serena
  My words are all I have left, in this war torn theatre arena

  Remember when I moved in next door, you were first to say hello
  And the day when you asked me out, I was too scared to go

  I know we were only eleven but something clicked that day
  Into our teens we grew knowing I'd marry you one day

  The day of our wedding, was the happiest day of my life
  For knowing my heart was true, when I asked you to be my wife

  Thank you for being who you are, and what you made me to be
  Never wanting me to enlist, to protect the land of the free

  I'm seeing places of our past, the greens, our courting grounds
  You playing with your lovely blonde hair, twirling it around

  Serena, my love, my friend, thank you for being my wife
  Tell our kids I love them dearly, thank you for being in my life


I'm growing ever weaker, as I write through redded stains
The darkening roam allures me, the light now starts to drain




~*~ Inspired by an image created by Serena Dunaway ~*~







http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-6.php
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A   Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 6:24 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment . PD
A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Magnificent write James n so is the win ! Big congrats!
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:19 PM
I can't thank you enough for your always kind words Upma on my poetry, James :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Great write James congratulations on your win. I am going to fav this one. Thank you.
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Hiya Maurice, thanks kindly for all your kind comments, James :)
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:46 PM
very touching write james many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Jan, very much appreciated, James.....
Guzzi Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Very YOU, unique haunting great wrap up last line too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Hiya Headmistress, I trust you had a lovely birthday. Thank you kindly for the plaudits, always appreciated from a classy clever poetess, James :)
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:13 AM
Oh, glad to the poem by the highlander, Hi James, congrats on the win.
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Hiya Dr. Ram. Once again many thanks for your always continuing support. This Highlander appreciates it very much indeed, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Touching tragic write.... Yet speaks of so much love.... Congratulations Buddy James..:)!
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Buddy Olive, glad you liked it. Now that Winter is nearing, it's time to get writing again, smiles 4 ya :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem James. Sadly families must receive such letters.
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:00 PM
That's the tragedy of War Brenda :(
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:53 PM
congrats on your win in PD's contest, very sad entry indeed
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Thanks kindly Francine. I'm smiling seeing your here, James :)
A   Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:26 PM
James, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Thank you once again Linda for honouring my poem, James xx
Foulk Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 1:00 PM
beautiful piece of poetry, heart touching. thank you for reading Foxes chasing dreams and for your comment
Young Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Wow, great write, james. It touched my heart, it reminds me of my own mom...
Peranteau Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Fantastical write Sir ! This reminds me so much of my son stationed in Kuwait. Picture perfect James ! much love, james
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 4:09 PM
I'm not familiar with Serena Dunaway, James, but this soldier's sad letter to his wife touched my heart. I bet many such letters have been written. There is a song from the musical 1776 about a man dying on the battlefield and this poem made me think of that incredible moment in the play when all the frivolity ends and instead of the hall in Philadelphia, suddenly the audience is taken to the scene of battle. The song is "Mama, Look Sharp." It's on utube and it's a tearjerker. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 11:27 AM
oh james, such a powerful, somber mood yet deeply divine.. wonderful word usages here that defined the whole theme with grace! :) huggs, nette
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