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His Face

I long for His face For that day shall be so great Walking hand in hand His love for me will not end Forever with my best friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/16/2016 2:54:00 PM
Sonya Carpenter, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:20:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sonya. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:31:00 PM
Sonya, what you have here is a perfect "tanka" poem. You have a syllable sequence of 5-7-5-7-7 which makes this work qualify as a tanka.
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:12:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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