His Face

I long for His face
For that day shall be so great
Walking hand in hand 
His love for me will not end
Forever with my best friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 16, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Sonya Carpenter, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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February 18, 2011 at 12:20 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sonya. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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February 17, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Sonya, what you have here is a perfect "tanka" poem. You have a syllable sequence of 5-7-5-7-7 which makes this work qualify as a tanka.
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February 17, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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