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His Eyes

Silly, small, smiling sweet How did I get so fortunate to meet This man, this boy, cute and fun I couldn’t have found a better one Happy, smart, following through How could this feeling ever be true He talks, he walks, says everything right Could it be, I’ve lost the fight Weird, needy, spoiled and sick How could he like this ugly chick Never moody, always good Retreat? Yes, I think I should Neurotic, selfish, evil and strange How could he change my awful ways Valiant, strong, simple and wise I believe he could when I look into his eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/21/2011 6:22:00 PM
Dear Rachel- This young man seems awfully familiar. I must have met him some time ago. :) This is clever, flows nicely, and your usage of rhyme is RIGHT ON THE MONEY! Gwendolen
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