His Eyes

Your eyes are so calm like the shade of a Banyan tree on a midsummer day. I feel soothed by looking at you, but my thousands of words are less to portray. From your eyes, I can't move my gaze. I love to lose my way into your eye's maze.

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Natasha L Scragg

Date: 10/30/2021 2:25:00 PM

Beautiful... The eyes are definitely (for me) the most attractive feature of a person. .. I love the way your verse expresses deep appreciation for this too. :-D

Plabi Pradhan
Date: 10/30/2021 3:46:00 PM

Thank you. Thanks a lot for reading. Have a nice time.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/30/2021 11:01:00 AM

Hello Plabi Pradhan, this sounds romantic to me. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2021 10:58:00 AM

Hello Plabi, You are welcome my friend. I am happy to hear it. Blessings my friend.

Plabi Pradhan
Date: 10/30/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hello Darlene ma'am, thank you. Your appreciation means a lot. Have a great day.