His Eye

A life is but the blinking of the Great Creator's eye.
What we do with that short moment, is the reason we are here.
The price we pay for living is the knowledge we will die.
A life is but the blinking of the Great Creator's eye.

God gives us just the time we need, to get our wings and fly.
What happens is not always the way it would appear.
A life is but the blinking of the Great Creator's eye.
What we do with that short moment is the reason we are here.


won 13th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/13/2009 2:42:00 PM
A poignant poem written so gently and sweetly. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/12/2009 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/11/2009 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest! Wonderful triolet. ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/10/2009 11:30:00 PM
Joyce congrats on placing in Matts contest, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:52:00 PM
This is fascinating. Triolet fits in your boat. All the best.
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:47:00 AM
Great writing my friend, I am so glad that the price was paid for us by our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ so that none that believe shall perish but have everlasting life. Thank you for sharing a most interesting read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 2/24/2009 3:59:00 AM
Love the first line of stanza 2 Joyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/23/2009 11:04:00 PM
Smile~'Heaven' would be proud I do believe!!!.... Much Warmth & Many Blessings Always, To 'You & Your Loves, Always, John!":)
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Date: 2/23/2009 11:02:00 PM
"We glide along the tides of time as swiftly as a racing river, and vanish as quickly as a dream"~ Psalm 90~"Hello Blessed & Gifted Joyce Johnson!"~I have noticed 'Your Wonderful Words' before dear lady~ And this write would be no exception unto 'Their Treasure' I would say...Smile...Excellent write of 'Truthful' depth, to hopefully bless another, while making them ponder!?.... cont....
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Date: 2/23/2009 7:35:00 PM
Lovely write here, I like the comforting message portrayed here.. God is the reason we have made it this far in our lives and we owe everything to him..His strength and love guiding us day by day..Nicely done, God Bless*Tyesha
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