His Eternal Creation

sky of amazement
in a sea of endless clouds
God's wonderment shone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 9:54 PM
only God can paint an original sky twice a day . sunrise and sunset are my favorite times of the day.... very nice!
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June 30, 2009 at 11:49 AM
this is lovely. I enjoy reading haiku poetry. the beauty of sky scapes is that each one is original and everyday is a pleasant surprise. I also enjoy painting skyscapes.......
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 4:28 PM
So many times I stare at the sky in awe of God's artistic powers. This is a beautiful haiku, Brandee! Love, Carolyn
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June 26, 2009 at 4:14 PM
What an uplifting and inspirational view. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 2:52 PM
You have made seeing and feeling one ... the full complement that drives the poet's passion. Bravo!
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