'his Elongated Wings'

sheltered my shield from harm His elongated wings underneath I feel protected no fear 110720111335

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Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/26/2011 12:54:00 PM

Wilma: Loved this! Caryl Ramsdale

Judy Ball

Date: 7/14/2011 5:38:00 PM

This is truly excellent. The Bible tells us we are protected from harm by the feathers of His wings. Loved this. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2011 12:01:00 AM

Sounds like a sweet angel!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/11/2011 12:17:00 PM

Sounds spiritual. An all-embracing love. A finely written piece. Love, Robert.

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2011 11:09:00 AM

The security of one by another or a loved one shines in your words Wilma. Another fine piece I have to say :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 9:40:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Wilma. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 8:14:00 AM

for HE has not given us a spirit of fear but of love and of power and a sound mind ... such delicate yet powerful words extolling your faith in our CREATOR Wilma.. a blessed reading luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/11/2011 7:32:00 AM

Yes now I see your meaning, does show both though...vacation has made my brain a little slower lol.... Hope your well my luv... miss u.....love Michael

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/11/2011 7:06:00 AM

That is a good way to feel as long as it s both ways... wonderful form and words that reach and grab... love Michael