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His Dream Far Off

He kept seeing vicious black bears in his dreams And throughout the night his body twist and tossed In disharmony of victims fights and screams Spring was chilling with a hint of morning frost And most days the black bears be hunting the streams A campsite was attacked and four folks are lost He saw the carnage wider wider up close His heart racing with the screams as each one goes 9/22/22 OTTAVA RIMA Poetry Sponsor-L MILTON HANKINS N/A

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Date: 9/22/2022 7:17:00 AM
Wow, you bring the reader in Connie to see and feel the terror in this Bear. Loved how you engaged the reader to feel and visualize through your words. Thanks for sharing...
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 9/24/2022 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Michael.

Book: Shattered Sighs