His Debtor

one keeps on singing pay you at the end of month˜ pays end of the world Oct. 11,2022 7.55am,/center> note: end of the month: usually a pay day

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/22/2022 7:21:00 PM

I think we all owe a debt to someone in our lives, and we do pay for it, sooner or later... This interesting write gives the reader much to think about... Keep the great poetry coming, Len!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/26/2022 12:06:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your visit, for reading my work and your kind comments my dear friend Kelly. God bless you always and your writing. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 10/18/2022 3:16:00 PM

Nice Senryu, Len. Go to see another Len Gasun poem posted. Write On my friend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 10/26/2022 12:07:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Bill for the kind comments. I will my dear friend as long as I am available. Thanks a lot again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2022 3:07:00 PM

yep, it can sure seem that way , Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/26/2022 12:08:00 AM

ha ha ha... thank you so much my dear friend Andrea for stopping by and your kind comments. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/11/2022 11:29:00 AM

Well pay out is coming Len, no Doubt of it.' And I'm not complacent about how well I will Do..? Yet Jesus knows, I must trust only in His Great sacrifice, and the mercy of His Father, So often we get side tracked overconfident in Ourselves, Lord keep me from the conceit of This world.'

Len Gasun
Date: 10/26/2022 12:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments and for reading my poem my dear friend Joe. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs.