His Debtor

one keeps on singing 
pay you at the end of month˜
pays end of the world





Oct. 11,2022      7.55am,/center>




note:
end of the month: usually a pay day

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Kelly Deschler

October 22, 2022 at 7:21 PM

I think we all owe a debt to someone in our lives, and we do pay for it, sooner or later... This interesting write gives the reader much to think about... Keep the great poetry coming, Len!

Len Gasun

October 26, 2022 at 12:06 AM

Thanks a lot for your visit, for reading my work and your kind comments my dear friend Kelly. God bless you always and your writing. Hugs

Bill Baker

October 18, 2022 at 3:16 PM

Nice Senryu, Len. Go to see another Len Gasun poem posted. Write On my friend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun

October 26, 2022 at 12:07 AM

Thank you my dear friend Bill for the kind comments. I will my dear friend as long as I am available. Thanks a lot again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2022 at 3:07 PM

yep, it can sure seem that way , Len.

Len Gasun

October 26, 2022 at 12:08 AM

ha ha ha... thank you so much my dear friend Andrea for stopping by and your kind comments. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Joe Maverick

October 11, 2022 at 11:29 AM

Well pay out is coming Len, no Doubt of it.' And I'm not complacent about how well I will Do..? Yet Jesus knows, I must trust only in His Great sacrifice, and the mercy of His Father, So often we get side tracked overconfident in Ourselves, Lord keep me from the conceit of This world.'

Len Gasun

October 26, 2022 at 12:09 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments and for reading my poem my dear friend Joe. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs.

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