Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

His Blue Palette - Anacreontic Verse

HIS BLUE PALETTE
~anacreonti verse~

Lonely moon
shed yellow light
in month of June
falling, falling
are the tears
carrying sad tunes.
Palette of blue
is the pigment
spilled to his ink
eversince the day
red, colored their den
at the lush grass
is his wife, sprawled
gasping, gasping
for some breaths
a deep hole seen
under her chin.
Her lips bit open
as if to shout,
eyes mirroring fear
was it too late?
They got her first..
There are questions
bugging, lurking
into his mind...
Answers he longs.
justice he craves
two years gone
but 'til now
It is unknown,
no one knows ...
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9:33 pm, January 07, 2015

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White Sage January 7, 2016 at 4:58 PM excellent write Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 21, 2016 at 3:43 AM thanks much white Sage.. =`)

James Fraser January 7, 2016 at 12:51 PM Sad deep poetry Olive. Reading it again and again it's as if it's written about someone. To me the imagery feels so so realistic. If for a contets, I'm sure it would have done well ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2016 at 7:41 AM JAmes, im not really sure what to enter but imad emy mind.. thanks for your generous comment.. =`) tight hugs and smiles, olive eloisa =`)

Nette Onclaud January 7, 2016 at 11:00 AM delighted by the dramatic pacing of this verse, eloi... great storyteller you are.. you go, grreat pinay!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 8, 2016 at 2:49 AM thanks much NEtte, I am actually torn which to enter.. =`) I didn't expect how i ended this.. =`)