Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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This afternoon there was a cloud that looked just like a hippopotamus....I thought river hog swimming in the sky..Sara

Hippopotamus

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                                                  hippopotamus
                                      Fall's black cloud design in sky..
                                                 cloud dissipated

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Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2011 at 9:08 PM oh, I missed this one. Yes, sometimes clouds can look so much like certain animals!!

Doris Culverhouse November 29, 2011 at 8:36 PM I like those puffy clouds!!

M. Hussain Effendi November 27, 2011 at 12:16 PM Nice imagery, Sara. Enjoyed

Harry Horsman November 27, 2011 at 5:10 AM excellent imagery here Sara, it's amazing the shapes one can form in the cloud. love this. harry

Bl Devnath November 26, 2011 at 10:11 PM Nice comparison with cloud and hippopotamus, enjoyed it. God bless all. bl

Sidney Hall Mad Poet November 26, 2011 at 9:24 PM Hey Girlfriend, Its been a long time. Love your poem. Lots of Love Sidney

Michael J. Falotico November 26, 2011 at 8:56 PM Very nice Sara. I do enjoy your painted words. Luv Michael

John Loving Iii November 26, 2011 at 7:24 PM was that what you saw?

John Loving Iii November 26, 2011 at 7:18 PM was that what you saw?