Hippopotamus

in my hands, a
poetry book

green cover doesn’t
matter

the weight,
does

meaty, the
insides

questions posed, poets
famous

“Edward,” was,
anonymous

hippopotamus, just
felt like saying this

cover to cover, I
grip

working measurements, with my
eyes

disguise, I
am just avoiding

the inevitable walk
out

to explore my
feelings

rather, I
put my nose back

into my catharsis,
not gravity
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Poetry can really be that - a "catharsis" - other than gravity. Loved your musings.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Anonymous Hippopotamus -- in the same category as Prepoceros Rhinoceros!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:54 PM
LOL! Love that!
Greenhough Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Anonymous is my second favorite poet. He writes very well. I like how you remain grounded.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Crandall Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Interesting poem, as always. I can understand that hippopotamus is a satisfying word to say. Google just helped me find a poem called Edward by anonymous, and i liked it, it reminds me of Lord Randal Childs 12 ballad that influenced "hard rain's gonna fall". It turns out its Childs ballad 13, and I found some recordings of it - cool! I'll stop rambling.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 6:43 PM
No, you are not rambling! Enjoyed the comment and so glad you looked up “Edward.”
Rolland Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:22 AM
really delicious and creative, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Yann! Feelings all over the place, but God is good. Hug ~ Kim
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:17 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Have a fun day as you write away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Love ya, Paula! Thank you so kindly to comment so often. Bless you!
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