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Hippopotamus

in my hands, a poetry book green cover doesn’t matter the weight, does meaty, the insides questions posed, poets famous “Edward,” was, anonymous hippopotamus, just felt like saying this cover to cover, I grip working measurements, with my eyes disguise, I am just avoiding the inevitable walk out to explore my feelings rather, I put my nose back into my catharsis, not gravity

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:36:00 PM
Poetry can really be that - a "catharsis" - other than gravity. Loved your musings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 3/12/2025 7:04:00 PM
Anonymous Hippopotamus -- in the same category as Prepoceros Rhinoceros!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2025 8:54:00 PM
LOL! Love that!
Date: 3/11/2025 7:55:00 PM
Anonymous is my second favorite poet. He writes very well. I like how you remain grounded.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 3/11/2025 10:56:00 AM
Interesting poem, as always. I can understand that hippopotamus is a satisfying word to say. Google just helped me find a poem called Edward by anonymous, and i liked it, it reminds me of Lord Randal Childs 12 ballad that influenced "hard rain's gonna fall". It turns out its Childs ballad 13, and I found some recordings of it - cool! I'll stop rambling.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 6:43:00 PM
No, you are not rambling! Enjoyed the comment and so glad you looked up “Edward.”
Date: 3/11/2025 9:22:00 AM
really delicious and creative, thanks poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, Yann! Feelings all over the place, but God is good. Hug ~ Kim
Date: 3/11/2025 9:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Have a fun day as you write away..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 10:09:00 AM
Love ya, Paula! Thank you so kindly to comment so often. Bless you!
Date: 3/11/2025 6:27:00 AM
Hiding in books? Instead of facing real life issues? That's what I got from this. I know it must be fictional for you. You seem quite active. Interesting poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 10:10:00 AM
It is only momentarily…I pray, chin up, and get busy. Hugs and thank you for the encouragement, my friend!

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