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Hippopotamus

When he sits He crushes the evidence Corrupting the human mind

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Date: 8/27/2018 3:59:00 PM

awesome

Date: 8/20/2018 10:52:00 AM

A wise haiku..and that is only when He sits,imagine when he farts :)..lol.Sorry but I couldn't help it.

Date: 8/18/2018 5:12:00 AM

The human mind... or something else?

Date: 8/17/2018 9:50:00 PM

OMG this is AWESOME!!! It needs to be the USA slogan... :D

Date: 8/17/2018 7:36:00 PM

Have I ever seen a Hippo sit? I'll ponder that later. Enjoyed this cleverness, Arthur. All the best ... CayCay

Date: 8/17/2018 7:19:00 PM

KerPLAT!!! I enjoyed this one, Arthur.

Date: 8/17/2018 12:42:00 PM

Love it Arthur...

Date: 8/17/2018 12:35:00 PM

So, is he sitting on his brains? LOL Wonderfully witty, Arthur. Enjoyed, Carolyn

Date: 8/17/2018 6:59:00 AM

Haha, love the layers

Date: 8/17/2018 3:36:00 AM

wow so few words say so much - very haiku like in its construction!:-) hugs Jan xx