Hippopotamus

When he sits He crushes the evidence Corrupting the human mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krampe Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 3:59 PM
awesome
Chircop Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 10:52 AM
A wise haiku..and that is only when He sits,imagine when he farts :)..lol.Sorry but I couldn't help it.
White Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 5:12 AM
The human mind... or something else?
Ella Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:50 PM
OMG this is AWESOME!!! It needs to be the USA slogan... :D
Godwin Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Have I ever seen a Hippo sit? I'll ponder that later. Enjoyed this cleverness, Arthur. All the best ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:19 PM
KerPLAT!!! I enjoyed this one, Arthur.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Love it Arthur...
Devonshire Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:35 PM
So, is he sitting on his brains? LOL Wonderfully witty, Arthur. Enjoyed, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Haha, love the layers
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:36 AM
wow so few words say so much - very haiku like in its construction!:-) hugs Jan xx
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