Hippocrite's Oath

Hypocrites’ oath

Dirt-cheep  government clinics  treat death
And disease just like they are  dirt and refuse
Which in a way is just about  fine.

Today’s  multi specialities,  housing as they are ,
A subtle tree branching off into labs,
A stethoscope hanging from every crotch of its,
Pre-set to prescribe a slew of tests whether it’s
Common cold or cancer,
Ninety-year-old or tiny tot,
Sugar coating their contempt for the medically illiterate
By glorifying life and ridiculing death and selling it to us
For a vulgar price, often a fortune for a sniffles.

How would they not? When folks  are willing
To sell off  homesteads to treat a harmless swelling.

Here, in one such, folks sit cursing their ‘fate’ology
Before a board which says Neurology
Like the rare cucumber slice floating about
In  its chic eatery’s sambhar* hot. Thinking of how, once out,
They  could wear the physician’s famous name around
Like a red and yellow flower garland
Bought at the wayside stall at a price, a hundred 
Times over what the farmer who  grew them got .

The good old physician seems gone, genial , suave,
Sitting in his modest office, respecting  your illness, 
Your money and the Hippocrates’  oath more than you
Which the new crowd  misspell as Hypocrites’ oath too
Not because they did not pass the spelling bee
But  acquired  the all important degree
And  an incurable greed for money.

11th Sept 14
Form: free verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/3/2015 10:02:00 AM
such a powerful hard hitting write - so glad you entered this - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:24:00 PM
Jag, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:32:00 PM
Well said Jag. Enjoyed hearing the truth as told. Verlena
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Date: 10/25/2014 2:03:00 PM
OH MY, I really LIKE THIS ONE!!! Your condemnation, I am sure, is spot on!!! In the states it is even kind of bad nowadays. They are turning away medicaide patients just because the govt. does not pay enough for the old and the poor. It is a travesty that health care has come so low in the world.
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Date: 9/24/2014 11:19:00 AM
powerful, biting read, bl..it sure is a hypocrite's code.. very real in this world going commercial...super!.. huggs
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Date: 9/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
sounds heartbreaking sad blinded with their own pride with greed a good mix the sames happening the world over creates hate in society and class divide loveless system excellent piece of writing i tip my hat
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Date: 9/14/2014 4:57:00 PM
good free verse here jaggy, with quite a lot of rhyme incorporated; hypocrites they are...I'll be in touch soon, just a quick look in tonight because I have hospital tomorrow...with the hypocrites...yes I can kind of relate to this one...speak to you soon, sweetie x
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Date: 9/13/2014 9:12:00 AM
Your every letter is true. It is our daily experience here in India. Doctors are heartless. They play cat and mouse game with their patients.Actually they are part of the society based on brazen consumerism. Your poetry has denuded them. Good poetry Mr. Nair. Bless.
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