Hi-Poo

smooshed onto the seat rim
it looked surreal like 
a Babe Ruth candy bar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 7:34 PM
ewww. yucky poo. Congrats.
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 4:13 PM
eww is the proper term here James, like Jan said. A great entry and no wonder it's a winner. Congratulations! :)
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 10:39 AM
eww this makes me never want to touch chocolate again or sit on a toilet for that matter lol:-)many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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