Hip

Hip roof house adorned
With a yellow wig that glows
From sun light dancing


(Go by this house many times in a week but happen by at a time when the 
angle of the sun with such that the autumn colored leaves looked like a wig on 
the house top.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 8:57 AM
have you been to the creek to see if the ducks are back this year? I haven't yet.
Griffiths Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Descriptive words, lovely, I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your comments. Pam
Sweetheart Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Lovely descriptive haiku, Sara, u have such a great style ... I could see this vision through your words... good job.. keep at it... Linda-Marie
Culverhouse Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 1:39 PM
nicely penned, keep sharing.
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