Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Hints of Light

Hints of light you come for me
Glints of hope please rescue me
For I am blind 
Mine eyes lie wide open 
But I fail to see
What is in front of me

Heart give way to truth
Leave me to know
Guide me and show
For pain is only temporary
But true love lasts
It lives more than life
And never slows

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Lynn Marie April 9, 2017 at 2:34 AM True love is so elusive and deeply painful to lose yet the beautiful memory stays with us forever and gives us hope to continue each day. Excellent writing Tim:) lynnxx

Arthur Vaso April 8, 2017 at 10:06 PM Such beauty, I wish it lasted for me! :)

Casarah Nance April 7, 2017 at 8:56 PM Very pure and nice. hugs x

Charmaine Chircop April 7, 2017 at 11:07 AM True love..so many want it..but sadly many fail to find it...and that brings pain..yet on the otherhand.Once found never lost..so they say. A Fantastic poem Tim. Tim Smith April 7, 2017 at 11:12 AM They do say that. The hardest is you find it but can't have it. Thanks for the nice comment.

Chris Green April 7, 2017 at 7:24 AM So true my friend, pain is only temporary but true love lasts forever. A little sad forlorn but there is a hint of light that definitely expresses hope. Tim Smith April 7, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thanks Chris...just morning thoughts originating from a movie I saw last night about romance and unattainable love.

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 7, 2017 at 7:13 AM Tim, the pain is palpable in this beautiful and deeply touching poem, but I am glad to see that light is creeping in at the edges :) Amitiés Tim Smith April 7, 2017 at 9:23 AM Thank you for your visit and wonderful comment.

Darren White April 7, 2017 at 7:11 AM It's such a beautiful poem, full of melancholy... And how I wish love for us all to stay, forever. Tim Smith April 7, 2017 at 9:21 AM I do as well...thanks