Hinged

A single raindrop  
kissed my cheek,  
and you tucked me beneath  
your jacket canopy  
before the message reached my sensors.

You sought to be my guard from harm  
and elements alike,  
shielding me like precious, carried cargo.

Stars spun from my eyes  
and danced like twinkling fairies,  
and I thought this must be  
love.

Safe, in the bubble you kept me,  
where it was easy-
until it wasn't.

My backward shotgun ride,  
securely hinged to your pickup.

Your shield of well-intended,  
false protection,  
weighing me down.

And I'll die trying  
to rise again, to walk away  
from rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:36 PM
"Stars spun from my eyes and danced like twinkling fairies, and I thought this must be love." - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Wheeler Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Truly appreciated! Thank you so much! Xo
mysore Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:36 PM
intricate it is dear poet. 'before the message reached my sensors'- being overprotected and later to be constraining. difficult emotion it is. beautiful write. Happy writing. congratulations.
Wheeler Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much! Xo
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