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Hindsight Is a Great Thing

So there I was heading for my first experience of corporeal form , it had been before all time AKA the Big Bang And the universe had been officially started ‘that I’d applied for it. And then pow ! decision time ‘ where to go and what to be . After all I was a ‘supreme being pure and all knowing , how hard could this physical living Thing be ? I wasn’t known for my patience back then so I decided to join the shortest queue and hey presto here I am on earth , Note to self not all long lines are a bad Thing..Dho!

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Date: 3/20/2020 8:42:00 AM
Ha ha, indeed.
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Simon King
Date: 3/20/2020 8:46:00 AM
No really!! Lol
Date: 3/14/2020 6:51:00 PM
Nothing quite like fresh air on the nerves. Naivete and birth are so natural together...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/14/2020 10:01:00 PM
I agree
Date: 3/14/2020 6:24:00 PM
Cool poem. I'm into this kind of topic and this is a quite unique take on our origin before birth. Love this!! Well done. Ron
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Date: 3/14/2020 9:58:00 PM
Thanks Ron

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