Hindsight Is a Great Thing

So there I was heading for my first experience of corporeal form ,
 it had been before all time AKA the Big Bang 
And the universe had been officially started ‘that I’d applied for it.

And then pow ! decision time ‘ where to go and what to be .

After all I was a ‘supreme being pure and all knowing  ,
how hard could this physical living Thing be ?

I wasn’t known for my patience back then so I decided to join the shortest queue and hey presto here I am on earth ,
Note to self not all long lines are a bad Thing..Dho!
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Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Ha ha, indeed.
King  Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 8:46 AM
No really!! Lol
Bordner Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Nothing quite like fresh air on the nerves. Naivete and birth are so natural together...J.A.B.
King  Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 10:01 PM
I agree
Thompson Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Cool poem. I'm into this kind of topic and this is a quite unique take on our origin before birth. Love this!! Well done. Ron
King  Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Thanks Ron
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