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Hindsight

He thought to himself If I could go back, I’d tell No one, not even the police, that I’d Driven by and shot him with ease, Silence, would be my clutch, so I wouldn’t be judged Guilty, nor lambasted like that, by Hypocrites in mass, for killing a Toddler thug, with candy bar drugs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/2/2012 8:57:00 PM
congrats Susan on winning an HM for this glorious entry luv.. enjoyed..
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Date: 4/2/2012 11:22:00 AM
powerful piece with just the right amount of grit, susan.. congrats on your special win!.:) hugggs
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:18:00 AM
Go get 'um girl!! ;) Congratulations Susan!! love it!!Big Huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:41:00 AM
What a way to start a new week seeing all the comments made over the weekend to my poetry. Thank you ever so much for your kind words on my poetry Susan. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2012 10:01:00 PM
Susan, this has a bad,, way to life in it... well kind of deep..enjoyed...had 2 read it twice.. ..take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD
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Date: 3/24/2012 5:20:00 PM
Magnificent writing, I enjoyed reading your poem Susan and wish the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2012 3:42:00 PM
Oh! Susan this is so good, harry
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