Hindsight

It was during his winter and before his expiration
When he bade me to come sit beside him.

In between the sounds of a life, enforced,
Those machines were all that controlled
The course of his blood. Soon enough, he said,
I will return to my source,
But for now, listen to me.

In love, I failed.
In life, I sailed
Across the sea.
I did what I pleased
Because my measure of life was in the ocean breeze,
Each second a dram,
Each hour a bottle of whatever the barkeep had.

Ever since I was a lad, I sought adventure.
The path ahead was my only treasure.
My shovel broke the earth and wherever it landed, I planted seed,
But I never stood by to watch them grow.

I never thought of death or let anything else restrain me.
Freedom was my only need.
But a path with no destination is an endless spiral
And its meandering route only
A diversion from the monotony
For what is such freedom, but distraction without a goal?

What the old man wants is
What the young man refused.
Choose, or one day be alone.

You will plant me in the earth soon enough,
He said,
And rudder your way through a choppy sea.
Find your path and enjoy the road.
Break the earth with your shovel,
And don’t fear the acceptance of some of the load.

Take the path, but read the signs,
And know when it’s time to stop for a while.

But what the young man denied
Is what the old man chooses.
And yet we are all hypocrites,
Even in that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 12:43 PM
Dear Jonathon, your poem is expressive and impressive, rich in textured metaphors and filled with thought-provoking, poignant imagery. A potent poem. Loved the rhythm, the word combinations, subtle rhymes sprinkled throughout and your last stanza for a grand finale to an amazing first post here. A dynamic piece without be over dramatic.. fantastic! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:41 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :)
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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