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Himalayan Monal

Imagine me the creature in broad daylight 
with green metallic crest
as I flaunt a copper plumage wild and free
whilst feathering my nest
native of the Himalayan range I scale
the sun drenched mountain peaks
the zoom and swoop spirit I encapsulate 
when skimming gold vein creaks

I dwell on red oak conifers or alpine 
meads bound by rock-strewn ware
pale blue eye patch forager whose curved bill dig
unearths a snow crust fare
coruscating migrant over altitudes
whose bone chill turf I fly
rooster among canopies I hatch my brood 
with poignant shrubland cry.


I am a Bird - Personification
Tania Kitchin   Sponsor 
Date submitted  26th July 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/2/2020 4:29:00 AM
Loved this wonderfully penned muse of a vibrant energetic Himalayan Monal. They are a rare sight. Congratulations on your win Howard! :)
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/2/2020 4:41:00 AM
Hi Aditi, I’m so pleased this work met your approval bearing in mind your status as a writer. Thank you so very much Howard
Date: 8/1/2020 1:06:00 PM
Howard, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery!
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/1/2020 2:28:00 PM
Hello Tania, I’m most grateful to you for this placement which I cherish and I’m glad you loved my imagery. Thanks for the time spent evaluating this contest entry. Howard
Date: 7/26/2020 9:15:00 AM
You sound wonderful - a terrific personification poem, Mr. bird.
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Howard Kerr
Date: 7/26/2020 9:22:00 AM
How I can thank you Caren for such a kind review? The very best of luck with all your literary ventures on Poetry Soup and elsewhere. Howard

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