Himalayan Bliss

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waterfalls thunder down Himalayan peaks, cuckoo calls pierce echoing mountains, April displays stalls of flowers for customer bees, pines wait, wearing overalls of pearl white snow, river flows silent between walls of ancient rocks! Something beautiful in 5 lines poetry contest Charles Messina sponsored written 07/Nov/2021 rhyme see bold highlighted words

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/11/2021 4:51:00 PM

I see we did similiar words, I like how this displays the fresh exuberance of spring, congratulations on your win~

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/12/2021 2:34:00 AM

Thanks Michelle! Your poetry is beautiful!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 2:20:00 PM

A stunning and beautiful write, Krish. Great imagery/even better now that I see the picture. Congratulations on your win in my contest. All the best...Charlie

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/11/2021 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Charlie!! Loved the contest!! Best Wishes Krish

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/7/2021 2:38:00 PM

Dear Krish, your title drew me in and your vibrant imagery and awesome rhymes brought me to the beauty of Himalayan bliss. Simply splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/7/2021 4:59:00 PM

I can imagine! You thoughts are so poetic, my friend.. :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/7/2021 2:43:00 PM

Susan How delighted I am to have you on my page! Thank you indeed! some of the most blissful spots are on the highest points on earth!