Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

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Himalayan Bliss

waterfalls thunder down Himalayan peaks,
cuckoo calls pierce echoing mountains,
April displays stalls of flowers for customer bees,
pines wait, wearing overalls of pearl white snow,
river flows silent between walls of ancient rocks!

Something beautiful in 5 lines poetry contest
Charles Messina sponsored
written 07/Nov/2021
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Michelle Faulkner November 11, 2021 at 4:51 PM I see we did similiar words, I like how this displays the fresh exuberance of spring, congratulations on your win~ Krish Radhakrishna November 12, 2021 at 2:34 AM Thanks Michelle! Your poetry is beautiful!

Charles Messina November 11, 2021 at 2:20 PM A stunning and beautiful write, Krish. Great imagery/even better now that I see the picture. Congratulations on your win in my contest. All the best...Charlie Krish Radhakrishna November 11, 2021 at 2:33 PM Thanks Charlie!! Loved the contest!! Best Wishes Krish

Susan Ashley November 7, 2021 at 2:38 PM Dear Krish, your title drew me in and your vibrant imagery and awesome rhymes brought me to the beauty of Himalayan bliss. Simply splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Susan Ashley November 7, 2021 at 4:59 PM I can imagine! You thoughts are so poetic, my friend.. :) Krish Radhakrishna November 7, 2021 at 2:43 PM Susan How delighted I am to have you on my page! Thank you indeed! some of the most blissful spots are on the highest points on earth!

Tom Cunningham November 7, 2021 at 12:56 PM Sounds an amazing place Krish, you were lucky to visit them. Tom Krish Radhakrishna November 7, 2021 at 12:59 PM Indeed Tom. Thanks! Another visit is due!!

Ilene Bauer November 7, 2021 at 11:35 AM great job, krish! i love the way you've incorporated the rhyming words... Krish Radhakrishna November 7, 2021 at 11:41 AM Thanks Ilene! I have been to the Himalayas and am in awe of the place!