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He knows not what is good for him You all know him, his name is Jim Uses his class bench as his cot What is good for him, he knows not He likes to live in his own trench As his cot, uses his class bench I teach him in life how to thrive In his own trench, he likes to live He’s naughty, he oft breaks his limb In life how to thrive, I teach him Him I pity, he’s so snotty He oft breaks his limb, he’s naughty To me his talk seems so witty He’s so snotty, him I pity He makes buzzing sound like a bee His talk seems so witty to me

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