Him & I

he looks at me and says,
 " i love you"
he looks at me and says,
 "im here"
he looks at me and says,
 "i care"
he looks at me and says,
 "goodbye"
i look at him and see,
 "my old friend"
i look at him and see,
 "the guy i thought i knew"
we look at each other, 
and see...something,
now...we see...nothing...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Please go read all the nice comments I got about you for "Lizzy Dear" your an inspiration.... love Michael
Chappell Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 6:43 PM
wow ,wow, my friend so wonderful but so ever lost
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November 19, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Strong write on love and loss, I feel your words throughout this poem....always Michael
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