Him

Green met blue,
and blond met brown.
Leather met cotton,
and city met town.
When you met me,
brandy met wine.
When eye met eye,
your lips met mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 4, 2017 at 12:27 AM
If you want to choose the right form for your poem? This is Rhyme. It has a wonderful cadence, and it is really lovely. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Maes Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thank you so much! I've read some of your poems as well. They're amazing :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:00 PM
Congratulations, Douglas on your win.
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Douglas, very nice and CONGRATULATIONS on your placement
May Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Very nice write..
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