Him

Him he is my sunshine my one and only. he will forever be here in my heart. He will make those gray clouds part and leave my heart he is my one and only,you'll find yours too.

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Skat A

Date: 1/18/2014 8:58:00 AM

Kristen,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Kristen Wacker
Date: 1/20/2014 10:30:00 AM

well thank you

Shawn Munoz

Date: 1/18/2014 1:48:00 AM

Love it . Short sweet and to the point., Always a good feeling when someone loves you that much to rip out the bad vibes in ones heart.

Kristen Wacker
Date: 1/20/2014 10:30:00 AM

yes it is

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2014 7:25:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kristen- I choose your first sweet poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kristen Wacker
Date: 1/17/2014 7:42:00 AM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2014 3:38:00 AM

Kristen, . An amazing write.. I LOVE IT! . A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kristen Wacker
Date: 1/17/2014 7:43:00 AM

thank you. this is the first poem I've ever written so thank you again for the praise

Jiril Clemons

Date: 1/16/2014 8:14:00 PM

Simple, few words, but yet as deep, Nice Poem, Kristen. The feeling of devotion to that someone is felt in your words. Anticipating your great work from you. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Kristen Wacker
Date: 1/16/2014 8:41:00 PM

thank you for that, that was actually the first poem I've ever written. thought I'd share it and see if i should keep writing.