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Hiku tumbleweed

wind-swept tumbleweed rolling through baron plains hope clings to dry roots

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Tom Woody

Date: 6/4/2025 1:23:00 PM

I don't write mean spirited poems about anybody, no matter how deserving they might be. As for this awesome little haiku, I like it.

Billie Jama

Date: 6/4/2025 10:27:00 AM

Sometimes solace can be found in drier and desolate things. I am grateful for being taught this lesson. Send you positive vibes

Lin Lane

Date: 6/4/2025 9:18:00 AM

A real tumbleweed, Billie and not the naughty ones I used to write about. I'm afraid little hope clings to those roots. I had to dodge many of them when I lived in Colorado. This is a fine Haiku.