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Hiku: true love whispers

from lips to God's ears y our true love~ r r a c w h i s p e r s f ~ l ~ o ~ a ~ t ~ i ~ n ~ g through the s * t * a * r * s * Contest: YOUR CHOICE m Sponsored by: Brian Strand Contest Judged: May 24th, 2025 1:28:00 PM Placement: First

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/25/2025 11:09:00 AM

I think your words are absolutely beautiful. I can't help but laugh that everybody is doing this for his contests, this is what the entries have morphed into overtime. Never in my life have I had to turn my head every which way to read a poem. Can't help but giggle. My humor delivered vent is now over. Thanks for listening. I do love the sentiment you expressed and, yes, the artwork. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/25/2025 11:53:00 AM

Good observation. Life never stops evolving. Hence, as humans changes should adapt and adopt us into its flows to shape us in or we get shaped out.