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Hiku: true love moves slow

true l*o*v*e m o v e s slow with care it f~~l~~o~~w~~s and g r o ws ~ not l-o-w when it ""g""l""o""w""s"" s-w-e-e-t-n-e-s-s and l*o*v*e m o v e side by side as close f-r-i-e-n-d-s ~ s-w-e-e-t l*o*v*e "s""h""i""n""e""s" *b**r**i**g**h**t*

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Date: 7/29/2025 2:19:00 AM
My goodness me...you have certainly spun a web of carefully crafted lines here, Maclawrence. Nicely done! :) john
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/29/2025 2:47:00 AM
I sincerely appreciate your comment, John. More blessings.

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