Hiku: true love moves slow

true l*o*v*e m
                          o 
                             v 
                                e 
                                   s slow
with care it f~~l~~o~~w~~s and 
                                       g
                                          r
                                            o
                                               ws ~
not l-o-w 
                     when it ""g""l""o""w""s""

s-w-e-e-t-n-e-s-s and l*o*v*e
m
    o 
       v
          e 
              side 
                by 
              side 
                      as close f-r-i-e-n-d-s ~
s-w-e-e-t  l*o*v*e
   "s""h""i""n""e""s"  *b**r**i**g**h**t*
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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Congrats on a top win, Mawclawrence
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Thanks as always Andrea.
Fleming Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:19 AM
My goodness me...you have certainly spun a web of carefully crafted lines here, Maclawrence. Nicely done! :) john
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:47 AM
I sincerely appreciate your comment, John. More blessings.
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