Hiku: summer is ending

s*u*m*m*e*r   is   e—n—d—i—n—g
f*l*o*w*e*r*s now                 w along paths~
                                   g   r  o
                          
n.a.t.u r.e  b
                      r
                         i
                             ngs  c~h~a~n~g~e~s

the  s u n  s*h*i*n*e*s                                     
                                           like g•o•l•d
blue cornflowers  bl~oo~m   
                                                     b*r*i*g*h*t*l*y
n.a.t.u.r.e  is  
                         v*i*b*r*a*n*t






Contest: YOUR CHOICE v
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Contest Judged: June 7th, 2025 9:52:00 PM
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations! Can you heal me understand if I read left to right or?
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Thanks. I really love your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 2:17 PM
I see you got a win. Big congrats.
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 5:51 AM
All those beautiful flowers aglow! Is Summer ending where you are? Just beginning here :) Congrats!
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Lol. Thanks for your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 3:57 PM
Such a pretty presentation. I had to think a bit with the word grow
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 6:15 PM
I'm so sorry to have caused you the stress. Thanks for your comment.
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