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Hiku: Sorrow

s o r row m o v e s s l o w l y yet its poison travels f a s t ~ tears it b r i n g s don’t d r y t h o ugh s l o w is its t r u d g e h a p p i n e s s remains its s c a r e~ it b o l t s from its s i g h t

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Date: 5/26/2025 12:35:00 PM
So well said and the format drives home the point! Congrats!
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/26/2025 7:29:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 5/25/2025 10:22:00 PM
Derp one. Well done
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/26/2025 12:15:00 AM
Much appreciated with love.

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