Hiku: I'll stay with my truest love

on the s..a..n..d..s of  t—i—m—e
truth of your  l~o~v~e   I    e

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l~o~v~e’s permanence stays

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falsehood  f~~a~~d~~e~~s  a
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Contest: YOUR CHOICE y
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Contest Judged: June 14th, 2025 6:42:00 AM
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Congrats. Love the ending on this one
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations, Poet Fried, on your top contest win with a terrific composition. Wishing you a wonderful weekend.
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Sotto Poet.
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