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Hiku: I'll stay with my truest love

on the s..a..n..d..s of t—i—m—e truth of your l~o~v~e I e n g r ave~ l~o~v~e’s permanence stays whichever p a t h c••a••l••l••s I'll s t a n d with my truest l~o~v~e~ falsehood f~~a~~d~~e~~s a w a y Contest: YOUR CHOICE y Sponsored by: Brian Strand Contest Judged: June 14th, 2025 6:42:00 AM Placement: First

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Date: 6/14/2025 9:30:00 AM
Congrats. Love the ending on this one
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 6/14/2025 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 6/14/2025 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Poet Fried, on your top contest win with a terrific composition. Wishing you a wonderful weekend.
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 6/14/2025 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Sotto Poet.

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