Hiku: happiness is free

happiness is F—R—E—E
when shared
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                                                         h
                                     loving h~e~a~r~t~s~~

a gift with no
                                                e—n—d


love then f~~l~~o~~w~~s
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         s*u*n*b*u*r*s*t and rain F°A°L°L~
w~a~r~m, e
                        n
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                                u•r•i•n•g,
                                                  p_u_r_e









Contest: YOUR CHOICE x
Contest Judged: June 12th, 2025 8:47:00 AM
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Congrats on top placement Maclawrence! :)
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Thanks Linda.
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Cute and cheerful this is.
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 1:12 PM
I appreciate your encouraging comments as always. Thanks.
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