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Hiku camels and dunes

u n zephyr across d e s, t m e s a l i c s march through morning m red horizon glows.

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/23/2025 1:49:00 AM

Lovely!! Congratulations Billie. ^__^ JCB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2025 10:25:00 AM

Fun camel’s hump! Congrats!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/22/2025 3:55:00 PM

Thanks dear

Ink Empress

Date: 5/21/2025 9:13:00 AM

Iv been in deserts and dunes, altho not my fave place to be , the dunes , especially when u go on a ride is like a rollercoaster ride, when i read this hiku i feel like i see camels and dunes literally! The beauty of deserts. How picturesque! " camels march through morning mist" that line is my fave and its just like im looking right at a painting!artistic! One of the best hikus iv read so far! A fave for sure sis! Youv nailed it! You write these so well! Best wishes! Sending you light always!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/21/2025 9:28:00 AM

Oh wow, thank you so much sis : )