Hiku camels and dunes


                             u   n
zephyr across d          e  
                                        s,
                                                                               t
        m   e                                                          s
    a            l                                                    i 
c                  s march through morning m
red horizon glows.
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Brul Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Lovely!! Congratulations Billie. ^__^ JCB
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 10:25 AM
Fun camel’s hump! Congrats!
Jama Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 3:55 PM
Thanks dear
Empress Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Iv been in deserts and dunes, altho not my fave place to be , the dunes , especially when u go on a ride is like a rollercoaster ride, when i read this hiku i feel like i see camels and dunes literally! The beauty of deserts. How picturesque! " camels march through morning mist" that line is my fave and its just like im looking right at a painting!artistic! One of the best hikus iv read so far! A fave for sure sis! Youv nailed it! You write these so well! Best wishes! Sending you light always!
Jama Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Oh wow, thank you so much sis : )
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