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Hiku 7

Written: May 23, 2025, for Contest by Brian Strand ********* e c l \|/ l u n a r i \ | / * * p ** s e wh en d a r k n e s s m a k e s us v i si b l e

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Date: 5/27/2025 2:32:00 PM
Really deep, "darkness makes us visible"-
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win with a thoughtful write embodying a cute antithesis. Wish you a pleasant forthcoming weekend.
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:17:00 AM
How beautiful about the eclipse! I see so many hikus from you dr sotto! You do them so well! I often am always inspired by the moon and his different phases and how it could impact everythn else too! Youv delivered one worthy of all the accolades! Best wishes , and if its already a winner; let me say congratulations! Sending you light always! Hope you are doing well! Stay poetic always
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Date: 5/24/2025 3:44:00 PM
That is an artistic arrangement.
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Date: 5/24/2025 12:04:00 PM
Very clever and awesome concrete style. I see quite a few experimenting with these.
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Date: 5/24/2025 2:00:00 AM
- Creative and great hiku, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/24/2025 1:44:00 AM
Very cleverly done. Took me some time though :)
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:01:00 PM
Ah, majesticis the shine that makes us real, this is nice, practice makes perfect! :)
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