Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

Hiku 7

Written: May 23, 2025, for Contest by Brian Strand

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Paige Hind May 27, 2025 at 2:32 PM Really deep, "darkness makes us visible"-

Krishnanand Guptar May 25, 2025 at 8:54 AM Congratulations dear poet on your top win with a thoughtful write embodying a cute antithesis. Wish you a pleasant forthcoming weekend.

Ink Empress May 25, 2025 at 7:17 AM How beautiful about the eclipse! I see so many hikus from you dr sotto! You do them so well! I often am always inspired by the moon and his different phases and how it could impact everythn else too! Youv delivered one worthy of all the accolades! Best wishes , and if its already a winner; let me say congratulations! Sending you light always! Hope you are doing well! Stay poetic always

Miranda Hawley May 24, 2025 at 3:44 PM That is an artistic arrangement.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2025 at 2:00 AM - Creative and great hiku, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar May 24, 2025 at 1:44 AM Very cleverly done. Took me some time though :)

I Am Anaya May 23, 2025 at 9:01 PM Ah, majesticis the shine that makes us real, this is nice, practice makes perfect! :)