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a real beauty to behold 
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on course she will r

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Date: 5/23/2025 10:26:00 AM
Such a creative and impactful haiku ~ love it.
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Date: 5/3/2025 4:22:00 PM
awesome, Robert. Congrats.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 5/3/2025 4:45:00 PM
Thanks. I worked FIVE hours on this one. Hahaha!
Date: 5/3/2025 1:12:00 PM
wow I have never seen a hiku written in this way - excellent ink! hugs jan x
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Date: 5/2/2025 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful! Shaping up these kus adds a little something something! Congrats!
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Date: 5/1/2025 11:00:00 AM
The day closes with a beautiful sunset. Well done.
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Date: 5/1/2025 8:15:00 AM
Dear Robert, Good to see youv also joined us on hiku project! And you did it very well! I love the ending! "She will rise" how creatively youv delivered this gem! Sunsets are my fave! And i think many would agree! You should write more hikus! Best wishes if this is for a contest! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/30/2025 2:22:00 PM
love your haikus flow, Robert, sage is the message r-i-s-e ing Sun stay your course~
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