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sunset f
            a
              l
               l
                i
                 n
                   g
                       down
a real beauty to behold 
                                 e
                               s
                             i
on course she will r

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Paul Marc

May 23, 2025 at 10:26 AM

Such a creative and impactful haiku ~ love it.

Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2025 at 4:22 PM

awesome, Robert. Congrats.

Robert James Liguori

May 3, 2025 at 4:45 PM

Thanks. I worked FIVE hours on this one. Hahaha!

Jan Allison

May 3, 2025 at 1:12 PM

wow I have never seen a hiku written in this way - excellent ink! hugs jan x

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2025 at 12:55 PM

Beautiful! Shaping up these kus adds a little something something! Congrats!

Hilda Greenhough

May 1, 2025 at 11:00 AM

The day closes with a beautiful sunset. Well done.

Ink Empress

May 1, 2025 at 8:15 AM

Dear Robert, Good to see youv also joined us on hiku project! And you did it very well! I love the ending! "She will rise" how creatively youv delivered this gem! Sunsets are my fave! And i think many would agree! You should write more hikus! Best wishes if this is for a contest! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always