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sunset f a l l i n g down a real beauty to behold e s i on course she will r

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P.M. Richter

Date: 5/23/2025 10:26:00 AM

Such a creative and impactful haiku ~ love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2025 4:22:00 PM

awesome, Robert. Congrats.

Robert James Liguori
Date: 5/3/2025 4:45:00 PM

Thanks. I worked FIVE hours on this one. Hahaha!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2025 1:12:00 PM

wow I have never seen a hiku written in this way - excellent ink! hugs jan x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2025 12:55:00 PM

Beautiful! Shaping up these kus adds a little something something! Congrats!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 11:00:00 AM

The day closes with a beautiful sunset. Well done.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2025 8:15:00 AM

Dear Robert, Good to see youv also joined us on hiku project! And you did it very well! I love the ending! "She will rise" how creatively youv delivered this gem! Sunsets are my fave! And i think many would agree! You should write more hikus! Best wishes if this is for a contest! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/30/2025 2:22:00 PM

love your haikus flow, Robert, sage is the message r-i-s-e ing Sun stay your course~

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/30/2025 1:35:00 AM

Hurray! Another Hiku-er! Excellent work :)