Hiking Bramble Bog

I took a hike in Bramble Bog, and reveled in the croaking frogs; the singing crickets and river song, were lovely, so I whistled along. By the river, on a great cypress branch, upon which, I chanced to glance, sat a bull and two young elves; they were doing something swell! Clearly, I’d walked into a peculiar land; elves and bull behaved like man. There they sat, painting away, with brush and canvas, on a field day. I’d never disrupt this cheery band, for they had such talented hands; and cloven hoof with paint-filled brush, was painting a portrait of a tiny thrush. I snapped a picture with my cell, quietly so they’d never tell; and slipped away into the wood, believing I had something good. Oh, my friends would all love this, I went home in ecstatic bliss. but, when I went to show my friends, I noticed something on the lens. The picture was a blotchy mess, an unidentifiable, amorphousness. There was nothing to show my friends and I never saw that sight again. A curious thing in my backpack, was a canvas framed all in black. A tiny note, there beside, read, “Elvin magic, we’ve applied... surprise!”
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La France Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:42 PM
ML, a magical write !
Kiser Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Proxenos Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 2:49 PM
What a fantastic imagination you have dear MLK - you create a magical world like Alice in Wonderland - I love this poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:30 PM
I have been told that many times; thanks so much.
Mcferran Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:09 PM
Ha! Tricky little creatures! Enjoyed this very cleverly told tale. ;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:15 PM
I can relate to something like this M.L. My husband took lots of pictures when working in Japan and all turned out except for photos taken in a Columbarium, they all came out completely black. Kind of spooky. I enjoyed the creativity in your poem M.L. xxoo
Kiser Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:31 PM
I've had it happen so many times; usually though, the film got too hot or I didn't get it into the camera fast enough. Thanks
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Nice narrative. Kept me glued to it the whole way through to the nice 'elvin' surprise at the end. Thanks, gw
Kiser Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Oh good, thanks for telling me.
Green Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:55 PM
This was really cute and enchanting M.L. I really enjoyed this poetic escape today. Thank you for sharing
Kiser Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:31 PM
I am glad, thanks.
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