Hike U Too

***GROWTH***

  Blossoms are Spring sweet
  Red orbs that cover fall down
  Keep peeling apples.




      ~~~JOY~~~

  New readings today
  Words not yet well understood
  Poetry...Supreme!




      +++ANIMATES+++

  Coursing the air bright
  Burrows in the earth so dark
  Creatures surprising...




     ^^^NATURE^^^

  Sun's rays warm and bright
  Moon's harvest fills up the night
  God adorns the sky!




     ) ) )WRITING( ( (

  Haiku for form now
  Try to think and count as well
  My imperfect words---




     ###PAST GLORY###

  Running the bases
  Tackling the one with the ball
  Memories enjoyed...


    

     < <  > > 

  Coaching the new boy
  Stance back, glove down, go for it
  Passing the dream on.

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Date: 10/26/2015 10:14:00 PM
A super fan
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your win with these fascinating haiku series-- and can I say I deeply enjoyed your word play in your title as well! Wonderful :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:25:00 PM
congrats on your nifty little collection here, DAniel, A well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in the Haiku contest with these expressive Haikus ... enjoy another victory tonight with luv my friend...
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:43:00 PM
Love it Daniel, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:39:00 PM
lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations Dan on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Daniel
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:02:00 PM
Pretty good little collection here, I especially enjoyed last one and Writing! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:15:00 PM
great collection of haikus Daniel, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:49:00 PM
Great work on all your haiku, Daniel. I especially like the "Past Glory" and the "Unsupported Code." Of course, I'm a sports fan so this would appeal to me, but all are very well constructed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 12:40:00 PM
This is terrific! And your title, just drew me in from the get-go !!! So clever!! :)
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