Hi-Ho!

Earth rushes on back,
Into white-dot black we go!
Hi-Ho to high/low.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 13, 2008 at 7:13 AM
The title caught my attention. There is a lot of depth for the reader to reflect on. Creative use of this short form. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen
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December 10, 2008 at 7:38 PM
Your a clever man..Always look forward to your postings. BG
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