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Horizon brings two paths Heaven takes to eden Hell brings the perdition Hearing an inner voice Haunting the mind and soul Holding the floating thoughts Healing hopeless spirit For Pleiades H Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 2-18-2017 Fifth Place

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Date: 2/24/2017 11:40:00 AM
Wonderful, hopeful write, Nayda! Congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/24/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda
Date: 2/24/2017 2:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Nayda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/24/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 2/23/2017 11:40:00 PM
Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/23/2017 11:56:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 2/23/2017 7:51:00 PM
very interesting how you did the two contrasting paths and ended with the healing of hopelessness. Congrats, Nayda.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/23/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 2/23/2017 6:05:00 PM
Nayda, I like the creative way you described your title. Well done! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/23/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Kim

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