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Driving on the highway. Body tired. Mind Exhausted. Over rivers of cement. Under rising jumbo jets, bellies exposed. Suddenly a flash of sunlight hits the taillight of the car in front of me, creating the image of a bright, white, hot diamond. It dazzles. For one brief moment the chemical reaction of reflected sunlight and my own weary mind produces a most surprising but acute state of clarity. Perhaps, even wisdom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/26/2016 9:32:00 PM
Dan Becker, awesome poem, to read again. LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:55:00 PM
:) SK
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Dan --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > Linda <
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:43:00 AM
beautiful write
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:43:00 AM
Dan, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:28:00 PM
Its amazing how a "shock" of sorts can stimulate the senses.......liked your poem....
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Date: 10/22/2013 3:33:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Dan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 1:16:00 AM
Dan,,, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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