Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Highschool Crush

Roses are red
Violets are blue
When I lay in bed
I dream of you

On my first day at school
You said hello and winked at me
You stood there looking so cool
I knew that we were meant to be

Since that very first day
I knew my heart was true
That I’d follow you all the way
From here to Timbuktu 

I think we were made for each other
Soulmates through and through
For me there couldn’t be another
I hope you feel the same way too

We can’t stop looking at each other in math class
I love it when you flirt with me that way
Let’s bite the bullet and break the impasse
Will you take me to the dance this Saturday?



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on January 9, 2019 for SCHOOL TIME CRUSH sponsored by FARAZ AJMAL  -  RANKED 6TH

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Eve Roper March 9, 2019 at 5:18 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. Eve ~`* Line Gauthier March 9, 2019 at 7:37 PM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Faraz Ajmal March 9, 2019 at 1:11 PM Such a sweet little poem it is," when I lay in bed, I dream of you", I absolutely love reading this line, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day Line Gauthier March 9, 2019 at 4:04 PM Thank you, Faraz. It was fun to regress to the time of puppy love. Thanks for sponsoring this contest and appreciating my poem.

Jennifer Proxenos January 10, 2019 at 12:32 PM This is a cute poem Line - first love - first kiss, first glance - all such a thrill! Enjoyed and reread it - memories of young love re-kindled! Poetry wishes, Jennifer Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 12:35 PM Thanks ever so much for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Mike Hauser January 10, 2019 at 8:41 AM Ahhh.... The good old days, wonderful memories here! Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 12:36 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.

Mahtab Bangalee January 10, 2019 at 5:15 AM its great Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 7:58 AM Thank you very much, Mahtab.

Tom Cunningham January 10, 2019 at 2:33 AM Happy and innocent carefree days, shame we have to grow up. Well written Line, bet it's made everyone think back. Good luck. Tom. Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 7:58 AM Thanks, Tom. So true. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger January 10, 2019 at 2:26 AM This is so funny to me as my first write for this contest included a wink the first day of school. Good luck in the contest, Line. When I had to re-write it because I had forgotten to RHYME it, I left out the wink. Good luck in the contest, Line. Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 8:00 AM That is funny. Puppy love is in the air. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Line Gauthier January 9, 2019 at 11:21 PM Thanks, Valerie. Much appreciated.

Bobby May January 9, 2019 at 9:47 PM WOW! That's it just WOW! man awesome, amazing reminds me of my school days!! Love that part of my life so innocent and refreshing not like today. Great write my friend!! Line Gauthier January 9, 2019 at 11:21 PM Things seemed so simple then. Thanks fro your lovely visit, Bobby.

P.S. Awtry January 9, 2019 at 9:09 PM On my first day at school/ you said hello and winked at me--;) you captured the sweetness of a young romance! Line Gauthier January 9, 2019 at 9:43 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, PS.

Gershon Wolf January 9, 2019 at 8:10 PM So innocent and pure, Line. Super! Love it! Best wishes, Gershon Line Gauthier January 9, 2019 at 8:25 PM Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.