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Highschool Crush

Roses are red Violets are blue When I lay in bed I dream of you On my first day at school You said hello and winked at me You stood there looking so cool I knew that we were meant to be Since that very first day I knew my heart was true That I’d follow you all the way From here to Timbuktu I think we were made for each other Soulmates through and through For me there couldn’t be another I hope you feel the same way too We can’t stop looking at each other in math class I love it when you flirt with me that way Let’s bite the bullet and break the impasse Will you take me to the dance this Saturday? AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on January 9, 2019 for SCHOOL TIME CRUSH sponsored by FARAZ AJMAL - RANKED 6TH

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/9/2019 5:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line. Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 7:37:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/9/2019 1:11:00 PM

Such a sweet little poem it is," when I lay in bed, I dream of you", I absolutely love reading this line, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, Faraz. It was fun to regress to the time of puppy love. Thanks for sponsoring this contest and appreciating my poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/10/2019 12:32:00 PM

This is a cute poem Line - first love - first kiss, first glance - all such a thrill! Enjoyed and reread it - memories of young love re-kindled! Poetry wishes, Jennifer

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2019 12:35:00 PM

Thanks ever so much for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Mike Hauser

Date: 1/10/2019 8:41:00 AM

Ahhh.... The good old days, wonderful memories here!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2019 12:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/10/2019 5:15:00 AM

its great

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thank you very much, Mahtab.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/10/2019 2:33:00 AM

Happy and innocent carefree days, shame we have to grow up. Well written Line, bet it's made everyone think back. Good luck. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. So true. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/10/2019 2:26:00 AM

This is so funny to me as my first write for this contest included a wink the first day of school. Good luck in the contest, Line. When I had to re-write it because I had forgotten to RHYME it, I left out the wink. Good luck in the contest, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2019 8:00:00 AM

That is funny. Puppy love is in the air. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/9/2019 9:49:00 PM

Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 11:21:00 PM

Thanks, Valerie. Much appreciated.

Bobby May

Date: 1/9/2019 9:47:00 PM

WOW! That's it just WOW! man awesome, amazing reminds me of my school days!! Love that part of my life so innocent and refreshing not like today. Great write my friend!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 11:21:00 PM

Things seemed so simple then. Thanks fro your lovely visit, Bobby.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/9/2019 9:09:00 PM

On my first day at school/ you said hello and winked at me--;) you captured the sweetness of a young romance!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 9:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, PS.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/9/2019 8:10:00 PM

So innocent and pure, Line. Super! Love it! Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.