Higher Perspective:

Dry fields weep in the cooling rain, Like we feel in agony and pain. /|\

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Date: 11/16/2016 6:56:00 AM

Great metaphor, our pain won't subside until we respect earth's cries.

Date: 11/13/2016 10:31:00 AM

Witness the living Earth. Love it. daver

White Wolf
Date: 11/14/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Daver /|\

Date: 11/13/2016 9:24:00 AM

This is a great analogy here, Rick. Glad to see it.

White Wolf
Date: 11/14/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I've been a bit slack of late, haven't been on the soup for a couple of days. /|\

Date: 11/12/2016 1:25:00 PM

tremendous imagery, rick... dry with rain. how vivid... huggs

White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 5:29:00 PM

Thanks, Nette for stopping by /|\

Date: 11/12/2016 11:17:00 AM

I wish we didn't have to go through these emotions but we do ... like the poem Hugs Eve

White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 5:26:00 PM

Yes, I'm definitely not alone in that respect! Thanks, Eve /|\

Date: 11/12/2016 10:20:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Rick. The Bard in you speaketh. Your pen got some gold ink in it too. Much love, bruh.

White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 5:22:00 PM

It was my first attempt at the crystalline form, I hope I have done it justice! Thanks, RW, always good to see you my friend /|\