Higher Perspective:

Dry fields weep in the cooling rain, 
Like we feel in agony and pain.
                 /|\
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Great metaphor, our pain won't subside until we respect earth's cries.
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November 13, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Witness the living Earth. Love it. daver
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November 14, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Daver /|\
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November 13, 2016 at 9:24 AM
This is a great analogy here, Rick. Glad to see it.
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November 14, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I've been a bit slack of late, haven't been on the soup for a couple of days. /|\
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November 12, 2016 at 1:25 PM
tremendous imagery, rick... dry with rain. how vivid... huggs
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November 12, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thanks, Nette for stopping by /|\
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November 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
I wish we didn't have to go through these emotions but we do ... like the poem Hugs Eve
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November 12, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Yes, I'm definitely not alone in that respect! Thanks, Eve /|\
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November 12, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Beautiful poem, Rick. The Bard in you speaketh. Your pen got some gold ink in it too. Much love, bruh.
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November 12, 2016 at 5:22 PM
It was my first attempt at the crystalline form, I hope I have done it justice! Thanks, RW, always good to see you my friend /|\
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