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Glow, flood pours the town. Thunder is rumbling. A girl drenched with rain. The friends locked all doors. saddest end, death looms friends restful bedrooms. 3st place win Tableau 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Photo chosen: 6 Date written: 03/27/2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:53:00 PM

Back with my congrats, Lasaad. Let your ink keep flowing.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 10:00:00 PM

Great imagery, Lasaad, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/1/2021 4:59:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words Eve, Wish you and yours a happy Easter . Warm hugs //Las

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 3:37:00 PM

You can't be too careful in thunderstorms. They can be deadly Congrats on your win Lasaad! Blessings, Kim M

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/31/2021 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words Kim, I Appreciate that, wish you and yours a happy Easter.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/31/2021 11:15:00 AM

Ah, I see you went dark with this tableau! Amazing write, Lasaab:-) Congrats!

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/31/2021 11:41:00 AM

Thanks, dear Edward, for your kind words.My best wishes to you too all the time.//Las

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/29/2021 9:54:00 AM

Great description of a storm. I detect some accident because of indifference to man. Hope I'm wrong.

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/29/2021 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Victor for your positive feedback on the outline, considering its pessimist. I believe you are right, since human ignorance is, at some stage, the cause of accidents.