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High Rise Tableau

Glow, flood pours the town.
Thunder is rumbling.
A girl drenched with rain.
The friends locked all doors.
saddest end, death looms
friends restful bedrooms.


3st place win

Tableau 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
Photo chosen: 6
Date written: 03/27/2021

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 12:53 PM Back with my congrats, Lasaad. Let your ink keep flowing.

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 10:00 PM Great imagery, Lasaad, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve Sotto Poet April 1, 2021 at 4:59 AM Thanks for your kind words Eve, Wish you and yours a happy Easter . Warm hugs //Las

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 3:37 PM You can't be too careful in thunderstorms. They can be deadly Congrats on your win Lasaad! Blessings, Kim M Sotto Poet March 31, 2021 at 4:02 PM Thanks for your kind words Kim, I Appreciate that, wish you and yours a happy Easter.

Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 11:15 AM Ah, I see you went dark with this tableau! Amazing write, Lasaab:-) Congrats! Sotto Poet March 31, 2021 at 11:41 AM Thanks, dear Edward, for your kind words.My best wishes to you too all the time.//Las

Victor Buhagiar March 29, 2021 at 9:54 AM Great description of a storm. I detect some accident because of indifference to man. Hope I'm wrong. Sotto Poet March 29, 2021 at 10:16 AM Thank you Victor for your positive feedback on the outline, considering its pessimist. I believe you are right, since human ignorance is, at some stage, the cause of accidents.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2021 at 7:02 AM - Really creatively written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sotto Poet March 29, 2021 at 7:52 AM Thanks for reading and commenting Dear Anne-Lise Warm hugs // LAS

Richard Lamoureux March 28, 2021 at 10:19 PM I think this would make Alfred Hitchcock jealous. A dark poetic write. All the best in the contest. Sotto Poet March 29, 2021 at 7:54 AM Thanks, Richard; I appreciate your comment. Best wishes to you

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2021 at 1:33 PM you have good imagination painting a tale around this picture, Lasaad. Sotto Poet March 28, 2021 at 3:03 PM Appreciate your kind words; dear Andrea, thank you and my very warm hug //