Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

High Note

This evening never seemed so nice, at the end of a daylight breeze....
Sunshine without thick humidity
Where the crickets sing around me
A break from gray filled rainy days

The sky prepares for the sun's colorful departure...
Fresh air in mountains splendor
Everything has its value, simple nothing more
All the while, green leaves wait to change color

Come sit next to me, surely you will feel it and see
It's not in the place of society that makes things work
With all the deadlines, promises or a perk
It's the place one must choose to be, on a high note to be free

Heidi Sands

8/23/23

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Akkina Downing August 29, 2023 at 8:45 PM A delightful poem, Heidi. Puts a smile on my face. And I would have loved to come and sit awhile with you. :) Heidi Sands August 30, 2023 at 5:33 AM Thank you Akkina. I am happy it brings you a smile and you are welcome any time :)

Silent One August 28, 2023 at 2:30 PM I missed your poetry my friend...your words create a picture in the most poetic way Heidi Sands August 28, 2023 at 4:12 PM Thank you so much, my friend. I am happy to see you here :)

Quoth Theraven August 26, 2023 at 11:47 PM Heidi, So glad to find this poem in moderate weather. You describe the value in freedom like no other. -Richard Heidi Sands August 27, 2023 at 5:49 AM I am happy you found it Richard. Thank you, my friend :)

Mike Gentile August 25, 2023 at 4:58 AM Nature, in its splendor, is free and here for us to appreciate and enjoy ! Your lovely poem brings that appreciation to life with its wonderful imagery, "At the end of a daylight breeze" Happy Friday Heidi xxoo Heidi Sands August 25, 2023 at 6:36 AM Yes. It is here and free to enjoy. We are lucky. Thank you. The breeze had just ended when I wrote this. Happy Friday :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 12:53 AM - A lovely poem, Heidi :) - I enjoy your view :) - (I have a "Creamy Chicken Soup" for you ... a soup of friendship ... my poem :) - hugs Heidi Sands August 25, 2023 at 6:32 AM Oh so nice! Thank you, my friend! I appreciate it very much. Hugs :)

Sotto Poet August 24, 2023 at 12:00 PM Heidi, your writing is truly exceptional. Your piece captures the essence of beauty in such a magnificent way, allowing us to escape from the dullness of our everyday lives and immerse ourselves in the glorious spectacle of a vibrant sunset. Heidi Sands August 24, 2023 at 12:19 PM Thank you so much Sotto. That is kind of you to say. It is nice to see your comment today. I appreciate it :)

Joseph May August 24, 2023 at 6:05 AM It's nice to get a break from gray skies, and enjoy the splendor of sunset, Wonderful write Heidi, hugs Heidi Sands August 24, 2023 at 9:21 AM Yes, true. Thank you Joseph. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2023 at 5:28 AM A poem delightful as a sunset. Enjoyed the inviting eventide you paint, my friend. Great to be out amid joy of nature. Heidi Sands August 24, 2023 at 5:57 AM Thank you very much my friend. It is nice to see your comment :)

Hiya Sharma August 24, 2023 at 1:05 AM Oh wow, how beautiful and profound this is.. With a sense of introspection, deep perspective, thinking and soul-searching! One of the crucial things in life is to realise that every symphony has its own rhythm and comes with its own lessons.. We just have to float and flow in the fluid time.. As aligned by the universal guidance.. Those ending lines are so deep and resonating- Hiya :) Heidi Sands August 24, 2023 at 5:56 AM Thank you Hiya. I appreciate your visit and kind comment :)

Jerry Brotherton August 23, 2023 at 5:10 PM A nice one my friend. The best moments in life are those that ask for nothing in return. Heidi Sands August 23, 2023 at 5:17 PM Thank you Jerry. You are right. I hope you have a nice evening :)