High Desert Scene

Rolling hills dim in the distance Beneath low-hovering mists, While an occasional stand of pines Punctuates the shallow canyon rim, The steppes to the summit appear Like wrinkles carved into the face Long ago, the sharp outcropping defines A deep crevice plunging sharply Toward the foreground in shadows, Vanishing into imagined darkness.
written August 10, 2021 (inspired by the scenic view on a screen-saver, location unknown)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Youve created a stunning scene Milton, Tom
Hankins Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Thank you, Tom, but I'm afraid I'll have to give credit to the photographer!
Gentile Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:18 AM
Great imagery invoked here Milton, especially "like wrinkles carved into the face" I really enjoyed reading it this morning, Happy Wednesday!!!
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August 11, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Mike. I had to revise this to get it past PS censors.
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