Hierarchy of Habits

The wise owl watches The cunning fox prowls The lordly lion stalks its prey -- The hapless human stares at a screen

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/4/2019 9:46:00 PM

Hear! Hear! I proclaim this a wise missive indeed. Which one is the least productive? Let me ponder this for two micro-seconds.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/4/2019 10:01:00 PM

I imagine you've finished pondering this habit-puzzle by now. LOL. Thanks for your generous evaluation of this brief ditty. Appreciated! :) gw

Mark Toney

Date: 6/3/2019 11:39:00 PM

“Hierarchy of Habits” of “the hapless human.” Brilliant write, Gershon! A Fav for me. ~Mark

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/4/2019 1:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Mark, for making this short poem a fave! I am honored and humbled. Greatly appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/2/2019 9:30:00 PM

...watching wildlife documentaries ;) pointed penning xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2019 9:32:00 PM

--Documentaries conceived, produced and directed by a hapless human, I imagine. LOL. Happy Day, Maureen! :) gw

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/2/2019 9:21:00 PM

Wow, Gershon! Wisdom in four lines...fabulous Panagiota

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2019 9:26:00 PM

No wiser than the owl, certainly. :) gw