Hierarchy

Violence under anarchy
Anarchy under my screams
Screams under a mental breakdown
Breakdown under chronic daydreams
Dreams under an uprising
Uprising under retribution
Retribution under pain
Pain under God
God under Me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 1:35 AM
Kyle very cleverly done, I like it..David
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March 6, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Nice one. The last two words are really strong. Love how you structured this one. Always, Laura
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