Hiding Place

Yesterday, I ran away from home. 
I no longer felt welcome there. 
So, I commenced to roam. 
Where am I?  No one knows where! 

I've had lots of hiding places - 
like inside a barrel of wine. 
I make sure to leave no traces - 
That aftertaste ain't mine.   

One day, I hid behind your couch.
You didn't know I was there,
and once inside a roo's pouch 
'til I bounced out in the air 

I've been to every place and land,
Traveling mostly by balloon.
Once, I decided to expand,
and I sailed up to the moon.

But, I am getting lonely, see - 
because I'm so good at hiding.
So, I will tell you secretly 
the tricky place I'm residing.

Yesterday, I ran away from home 
Guess what - I'm hiding in this poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/7/2024 7:07:00 PM
Loved the end "Yesterday, I ran away from home Guess what - I'm hiding in this poem." I did not expect it, :)
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David Crandall
Date: 8/7/2024 7:24:00 PM
Glad you liked it Paige. A little silly, but hopefully, fun!
Date: 8/7/2024 11:55:00 AM
Hello David Crandall, oh, a very special place to hide. i would not think of looking there. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2024 10:11:00 AM
Hello David, Yes you did fool me. LOL enjoy your day m y friend. /Darlene/
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David Crandall
Date: 8/7/2024 12:45:00 PM
Haha - fooled you! :-)
Date: 8/7/2024 11:21:00 AM
Tanks Benjamin!
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Date: 8/7/2024 11:12:00 AM
Great ending. Very Poo like witha taste of Seuss. Tanks for sharing! Really, tank you!
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